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Abandoned, but With Hope ("Shake" Entry) 
4th-Apr-2017 10:49 am

Title: Abandoned, but With Hope

Characters: Rose Tyler

Word Count: 316

Rating: G

Spoilers: Doomsday ending

Warnings: N/A

Episode setting: Doomsday S2 E13

And with that he was gone. The Doctor was gone. He left me on a beach. He put me here. As much as I tried to be angry with him, I just couldn’t. He sacrificed his happiness for me to have a better life. Tears streamed down my face when I realized what this all meant.

I would never see my Doctor again. My hands were shaking, and my breath was short. I turned to look at my Mum, she was standing by the car still here for me. I tried to hold it in. I tried to be strong, but the shaky sobs just poured out, no longer was I in control.

I wiped away the tears, but they just kept coming. Soon my Mascara was running, but I didn’t care. I didn’t care about anything but the Doctor.

The worst part was that stupid sun. He said he was burning up a sun just to say goodbye. But just my luck it burned out just at the moment...The moment I had been waiting for, for a long time. He was finally going to tell me.

I tried to steady my shaky breath but it was to no avail. I had never met someone like the Doctor, I never will again. I am not about to give him up this quickly. I thought to myself.

Then and there I decided nothing would get in my way from finding the Doctor, I will break all the rules of time just to see him again. I will face the consequences, but I will get him back. And that is a promise I will not break.

Determinedly I wiped my eyes, I better get to working. I will not rest until my Doctor is mine again, he said it will fracture the universe if we tried. But I will find a way. I will always find a way.

4th-Apr-2017 08:22 pm (UTC)
Oh, this is so cool! You really made me feel for Rose and I could hear all the emotion in her voice.

Great work!
4th-Apr-2017 10:14 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Only one of the many sad companion endings... But I still feel like she got the best life after traveling with the Doctor.

22nd-Apr-2017 04:41 am (UTC)
Ohhh, this was powerful, lovie!!

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